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Below is the poem entitled ocean commotion which was written by poet Carolyn Devonshire. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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ocean commotion

wind lifts salty air
scent of the sea fills my hair --
fishing without care

pelican dives fast
shrimp on the hook was my last --
strips the bait I cast

turn with quick motion
see crab stealing sun lotion --
ocean commotion



*Entry for Carol’s Rhyming Haiku contest

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  1. Date: 3/11/2011 12:57:00 PM
    I knowvery little about japanese forms but even I can recognise charm and skill when I see it "scent of the sea fills my hair"....mmmmm I can almost taste it....congrats and well done, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/11/2011 7:51:00 AM
    Congrats Carolyn on your 1st place win with this beautiful Haiku!---kashinath

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 3:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 11:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your great win.........George

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 10:13:00 AM
    A pleasure dear one to see you again at the top Carolyn. Congratulations"getting to be a good habit" on your worthy first place win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 10:06:00 AM
    Hey Carolyn, congratulations on this gem winning in Carol's contest, love Wilma

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 8:53:00 AM
    Wonderful images in this sensational Haiku., Carolyn. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 6:08:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in my contest Carolyn. Thank you for supporting my contest and my decision to run my contest my way. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 12:04:00 AM
    Lovely ocean commotion Carolyn. many congrats dear friend.

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 7:56:00 PM
    Lets pack it all in and go fishing. Congrats on your "ocean commotion"..Love, LNC

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 5:57:00 PM
    Nicely done! It makes me want to go fishing! RAY

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 4:55:00 PM
    anything less than first place would have been a literary tragedy! Congratulations Carolyn!

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 3:40:00 PM
    Even your title begins a clever rhyming sense of joy!! Makes me long for a trip to the ocean!! Congratulations, Carolyn!!

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 2:47:00 PM
    lovely word picture here I can't wait! Light & Love CONGRAD's

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 2:42:00 PM
    have some honery animals! :)

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 2:33:00 PM
    you are super -duper no.1 here, carols... winning streak for this UBER SUPERB win... thumbs for the well-deserved hot! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 2:04:00 PM
    Congratulations, Carolyn : ) I didn't realise I'd got a first too until Dr Ram and Andrea told me. Jack.

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 2:00:00 PM
    Very descriptive and I can see you fishing in the sunshine. congratulations on your no. 1. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 1:54:00 PM
    I remember this cute one, CArolyn, Big congrats to you.

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 1:46:00 PM
    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, Carolyn

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