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The Seasons - Rhyming Haiku

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The Seasons - Rhyming Haiku

icy kiss of death
frozen on sweet autumn’s breast
winter’s frosty breath   

frozen crystal spears
melting in a thousand tears
joyful spring is here

what were buds on trees
live there dreams in lush green leaves
kissed by summer breeze

life begins to wane
summer bursting into flames
autumn’s sweet refrain
          ~~~

Author:  Elaine George

Written:  march 1, 2011
For:  Carol Brown’s Nature Rhyming Haiku contest.
Awarded:  First Place


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  1. Date: 11/24/2011 12:23:00 AM

    ELAINE, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! AND CONGRATULATIONS IN THE contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

  1. Date: 4/6/2011 6:10:00 PM

    wonder rhyming haiku, you deserved to win.

  1. Date: 3/11/2011 7:51:00 AM

    Congrats Elaine on your well deserved 1st place win!---kashinath

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 3:49:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win...Sara

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 12:26:00 PM

    This is absolutely stunning Elaine, congratulations on your 1st place win in Carol's contest ;-)

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 10:10:00 AM

    A pleasure dear one to see you again at the top Elaine. Congratulations on your worthy first place win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 9:57:00 AM

    Beautiful. Thanks for your kind comments and congratulations to you : ) Jack

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 9:13:00 AM

    The last verse ties up the transition of seasons (and life) so well, Lainie. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 6:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win in my contest Lainie. Thank you for supporting my contest and my decision to run my contest my way. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/10/2011 12:03:00 AM

    Autumn's sweet refrain indeed. Lovely. many congrats dear friend.

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 7:55:00 PM

    Congrats..all are great, but I love spring the best..BG

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 4:57:00 PM

    Awesome Elaine. Congrtatulations to you

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 3:38:00 PM

    It feels as if it awakens each season with a beautiful song....lovely Elaine!!!! Congratulations on this number 1 poem!!

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 2:46:00 PM

    and around we go!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 2:30:00 PM

    yes for your no.1 win, elaine... my joyous thumbs up for you! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 2:17:00 PM

    Congrats Lainie on your first place win in Carol';s contest with a wonderful and expressive entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 1:58:00 PM

    Very nice Elaine. Glad to see you at the top. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 1:53:00 PM

    Elaine the last two stanzas were especially gorgeous. I'm glad I got to see t his winning set of haiku! congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 1:46:00 PM

    Congratlations on the first place win in the contest of carol, Elaine

  1. Date: 3/4/2011 11:32:00 AM

    Elaine you can still read my blogs,now essayettes,on my notes page of facebook rgds Brian

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 2:10:00 PM

    Awesome, Lainie. Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 12:42:00 PM

    Lovely lines of each Haiku to brighten the contest entries Lainie.. delicate visuals so profound in each verse ..good luck in the contest my friend..

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 10:12:00 AM

    These are all so, so great! Elaine, you be de greatest. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 9:22:00 AM

    Beautiful rhyming unforced with equally nice expressions on The seasons' visuals with apt images, Elaine

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 8:42:00 AM

    Very good.