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'Water'

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'Water'

Water gushed over parched land fractures are slowly filled left by drought terrain humidified by cold water pouring down replacing warmth everything ice-covered Water set in ice form fluffy and breathtaking an impish sting to its beauty arctic my clothes are drenched twirl around with outstretched arms tears are forgotten By: Wilma Neels Contest Name: Nature, Four In One
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  1. Date: 3/7/2011 11:35:00 PM
    Wow, a big congratulations to you, Wilma. Love to see your talent so recognized. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 5:44:00 PM
    This is a wonderful write from you Wilma!Congrats on your 1st place win---kashinath

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 1:24:00 PM
    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Constance, Wilma

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 11:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's Nature, Four In One contest Wilma. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 8:29:00 AM
    This is wonderful, Wilma!! So deserving your win!!! Hooray for you!!

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 7:23:00 AM
    Oh, so cool that this one won 1st place! I enjoyed it as soon as I read it the first time. Hey Wilma, you are raking in the 1st places lately, way to go~!

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 6:18:00 AM
    Congrats Wilma..well done, enjoy your big win. BG

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 6:02:00 AM
    Super duper congrats on your awesome win Missy -- totally deserved win with this outstanding piece :) loved this the first time around as well as now :) way to go & I hope Monday's treating you good :D hugs to you :D

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 12:23:00 AM
    This was truly an awesome write dear Wilma. Warm congrats.

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 10:19:00 PM
    It's a honour to be placed second after this awe inspiring poem Wilma. congrats. Harry

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 9:06:00 PM
    you are tops, wilma... biggie congrats for the win..:) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 7:41:00 PM
    !!! Congratulations on your huge, Ist Place Win in Constance's Contest, Wilma! Exquisite write! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 7:32:00 PM
    Big congratulations on taking the top spot, Wilma! So happy for you. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 7:15:00 PM
    Congrats Wilma on another first place win today luv.. both well deserved for awesome entries luv.. enjoy your top spot where the air is ultra rare luv..

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 7:14:00 PM
    Congratulations, Wilma, on first place in my contest, that final Senryu, so visual, and something I would do. Could you send me your address by soup mail, so I can forward your Certificate of Achievement in Poetry, which is the prize for this contest.

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 9:39:00 AM
    Wow! This sure is a powerful & vivid write, Wilma-- I really like how you presented this, from water to ice (love how describe is as fluffy btw!) to bringing in a personal encounter in the end-- I hope this scores high, Missy -- this is wonderful :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 11:40:00 PM
    I guess I saw this one already. Hopefully I am caught up with all your poems. I just loved the way you brought your personal feelings into this one at the end!

  1. Date: 3/2/2011 1:31:00 AM
    really enjoyed. lovely write.

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 6:38:00 AM
    Magnificent write Wilma with your four forms penned so stunningly my friend.. good luck in Constance's contest .. she did give us quite a challenge luv..

  1. Date: 3/1/2011 5:10:00 AM
    Thank you for supporting my contest.

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