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Surreal

Like tipper tapping tiny feet toddling
I watched your mirriard of droplets 
stream down my car window
Night sky like the backdrop of a show
and the lightning strikes adding to the mood of the performance
where ordinarily it might highlight or cast creepy shadows
Several crashes of thunder the only sound affects 
breaking the deathly silence you could have sliced through
Stormy air and the countless hairs 
of the body anticipating action
was the change in atmosphere of any such production
Yet for all the familiarity of yet another down turned weather front
something was amiss
I sat there trying to will my merry-go-round world to stop
to let me off and set me free once more
that I might strike out loose and run wild once more
like a horse loose of the reigns widly galloping away
alas I couldn’t budge 
just sat their frozen to my seat
despite needing my home comforts around this hour

Knocking every ounce of confidence from me
breaking me to a point 
where my tears were but one with the evenings downpour
No chocolate or ice-cream treats for pick-me-ups
nor interval for refreshment here
which would have been at least a little concillation
No, right now the world stood still
as our relationship played over from start
until someone knocked on the glass
concerned as to whether or not I was alright
Black and boggle eyed from wet mascara and numerous tears
like something out of a horror film
I turned to see who dare break this spell
Nodding to say I was fine 
but not stupid they could see far from it
They pulled me out into secure arms
You could have been anyone
but you were gentle and understanding
A raging fire warmed by chilled bones
with simple hot sweet tea and the warmth of a blanket
your eyes soaked me in drawing out my story
you listened intently
I poured out my soul
You drank me in
Bringing me out of myself
you turnd so much sadness to humor
putting another chapter of life to bed
opening another as day broke through
I am now thankful for what passed
for without that part of life
we might never be making our own sweet music
creating future ambition and drive
Nesting and nestling as one together
Souls on one ship we sail new seas


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  1. Date: 11/3/2011 1:47:00 PM

    Just wanted to thank you for stopping by, Anna-Marie. I hope you'll be posting some new work for us to enjoy soon, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/5/2011 8:47:00 AM

    Nice use of rhyme and alliteration. The emotion comes through your words. I really like the last line. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 12:16:00 PM

    Dear Anna-Marie, the helplessness you express in the earlier lines is something many feel. Knowing you have health issues, this poem is even more powerful. I'm so glad you have someone who shares the ups and downs with you. I've been off the Soup for a while and have missed reading your poetry. This poem offers much hope to those who feel downtrodden. Love and blessings, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 11:58:00 AM

    Smile ~ Tis good to behold "Your Glowing Light" again my dear ~ "Excellent Painting, Brushed From 'The Depths of A Beautiful Place!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have 'A Very Beautiful Evening My Dear;'" Bye!:) ~

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 11:54:00 AM

    Smile ~ It truly matter but what does is the fact that, "Your Beauty, 'Precious Anna Marie,'" seems to have perhaps found love everlasting one would hope amid this daybreak beyond a nights moment within "Your Treasures" life so, one can only rejoice for such a blessing my dear and, "Thank You," for blessing my own humbled heart with such a kind com; always grateful and also ~ Cont:)

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 11:49:00 AM

    Smile ~ For some reason this reminds myself of the lyrics of a song from the 70's ~ "You almost had me roped and tied, but sweet freedom whispered in my ear, your a butterfly and butterflies are free to fly, so fly away, high away, bye bye...." ~ Smile, I do not know why exactly this wonderful expression of depthful heart and Soul caused myself to remember such that verse but ~ Cont:)