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serengeti king

stealthily stalking
   grasses of gold disguise him....
      serengeti king

streaks of black and white
   pounding out panic's pursuit....
       dusty clouds of fear

weaklings fall away
   struggle vainly to survive....
      nature roars aloud

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  1. Date: 3/1/2011 6:05:00 AM

    Congrats deb on your well deserved win with this beautiful Haiku---kashinath

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 8:45:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, Deb! An animal I don't know too much about, but you sure give some nice description.

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 8:23:00 PM

    love it, powerful haiku, congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 5:45:00 PM

    Very descriptive work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 1:05:00 PM

    Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, deb

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 10:31:00 AM

    Hello Debbie, Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest with this beautiful entry As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 10:15:00 AM

    Good to see you poem at the top Deb, beautiful job. Congratulations on your poem's honored second place recognition.

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 7:21:00 AM

    Congrats Deb on your second place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry my friend.. enjoy another grand victory with luv..

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 7:05:00 AM

    nature roars aloud indeed. wow.Many congratulations for this win.

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 6:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Deb. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol