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The Dream

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The Dream

Hands held high like a bed of roses.
Red all around like a sea of blood.
You scream for me with shock in pain.
The sound that froze me and made me stare.
I turn my face to see you in a white dress,
like a lonely angel in the demons world.
Swiftly I come and stand by your side,
fearing the sight behind my eyes.

I carry you with my burned rusted hands
but the pain is little compared to the love that I have,
running from the shadows, we meet the naked red hands.
The hands that try to pull us to the shadows
but I am strong and shall not wither.
I clasp the angel of my broken soul between my hands,
the white twilight of the lost space of my heart.
I will fight for you and never back down.

I stumble to my knees and hit the shredded knives,
that bloodied the white dress of my only love,
but scream I do not for I am the hero of the hazel eyes.
The eyes that stare at me with shock and fear.
The devil within me struck out and hit life,
making me scream with my eyes filled with black
and all was silent.

A door appears in front of a mystic light and I
open it with my bleeding knee.
Blinded I am and my eyes burn like fire.
I was laying with her by my side.
Her scent killed the numbness that filled my mind
and all was gone when the dream was done.

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9th place in "The dreams. contest.." 

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  1. Date: 2/21/2012 8:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Sami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 5:00:00 PM

    Sami, I liked this poem a lot. You have the ability to tell a story and keep the reader interested, throughout. I really enjoyed reading it. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 4:07:00 PM

    very vivid sort of dream mate, another reality, somewhere in the mist...

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 2:46:00 PM

    A very good one Sami...and of great importance...is Dr Ram's comment...we have been looking for him for a long time and it is delightful to see that he is back....

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Congrats with your well deserved win,Sami:) TC,Arild

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 4:10:00 AM

    Congratulations Sami, a well deserved win xx

    Helbaoui Avatar Sami Helbaoui Date: 2/20/2012 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for much! I'm really happy with my placement :D
  1. Date: 2/19/2012 9:02:00 PM

    Congrats. Sami on your special winning poem, love,vie

    Helbaoui Avatar Sami Helbaoui Date: 2/20/2012 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading :)
  1. Date: 2/19/2012 7:55:00 PM

    SAMI.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

    Helbaoui Avatar Sami Helbaoui Date: 2/20/2012 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And thank you for the placement! :D
  1. Date: 2/22/2011 12:24:00 PM

    I highly enjoyed this. Great & strong lines.

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 6:04:00 AM

    A great write, thank you also for your lovely comments, love, Simone

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 5:48:00 AM

    Thank you very much Dr.Ram but i think I'm late for the competition... I can't find it posted anymore.. :(

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 4:30:00 AM

    Very creative and fantastic end to the story, Sami