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Empty cloud

Lifeless cloud passes over me,
moving it's dark grey shadows.

All alone,
drifting far away.

Slowly disappearing,
misting into the lonely sky,
making the cold afternoon seem sad.

No more rain kissed tears.

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  1. Date: 8/21/2011 10:36:00 PM

    Lovely verse Ryan, reminds me life can be like that too.

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 12:18:00 PM

    Thank you my fellow writers :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 7:24:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ryan. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 5:48:00 AM

    this is a nice write

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 5:00:00 AM

    Nice observation with fine expressions, ryan