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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:40:00 AM
    I've liked all of your poems so far. You certaintly have a talent. It needs some refining but it is always enjoyable and thought provoking. I especially liked the 7th couplet. I would have said, "He was a strange danger. Holding me as a stranger". But that's just me as I read it. You are doing a great job. Rockman :-)

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 2:49:00 AM
    The poem was touching. I enjoyed reading it. I hope you don't feel you can't trust anyone anymore.

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 5:37:00 AM
    Very moving and touchy expressions of the betrayal you have penned so well, asma