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Farewell

Picking up the pieces

the anger still fierce

losing a loved one

to a disease you can't control

scrambling for answers 

looking through tears

as we gather for

a last farewell

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  1. Date: 2/20/2011 10:09:00 PM

    A sad situation, and who can blame someone for feeling this way!

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 3:35:00 PM

    I just lost a cousin less than a month ago. I know the feeling too well. Just correct two misspelled words in your presentation: "peices" is correctly spelled "pieces", while "farwell" is normally spelled "farewell".

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 3:04:00 PM

    Nice write quite meaningful on farewell, karen

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 2:22:00 PM

    I know the feeling. Thanks for describing it so well. Ellen