Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

A Girl named Sue

Susann Riedel Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled A Girl named Sue which was written by poet Susann Riedel. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Susann Riedel

Best Susann Riedel Poems

+ Fav Poet

A Girl named Sue

Hi my Name is Sue, what about You?
I live in a village with golden Trees
In the summertime we have a lot of Bees
Just old people, nothing's going on here
So all what you can do is drink a Beer
So cheers to all my friends, this is the End
Good advice for a smalltown Girl
They never call you here a Pearl
Be friendly and kind all the Time
Or you never get a Like
Be silent and Polite
Then you will be Fine
I'm fed up with these Rules and Fakes
Wanna get out of this Cage
Free like a bird under the Clouds
This would be heaven no Doubt
Out on the street with a big fake Smile
Watching the people for a While
They looking at me and starring Around
Can hear the whisper in the Ground
Wanna scream from the top of my Lung
Wanna start a fight but can not move On
Wanna step back but have no Power
Rain is water me like a Flower
So now im here in front of the Wall
My soul is naked, God Bless you all
It's time to leave the battlefield
Im wearing my mask as a shield
At the end of the day im just a Girl named Sue
What about you?

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 2/19/2011 3:01:00 PM
    a good flow of rhyme, I like the ending.. what about me lol, enjoyed your write,..p.d.