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Broken

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Broken

I was broken once 
But now I'm not 
I Pray for my innocence 
Of now I'm not
He followed me there
And I stood not 
He took me down 
And broke my soul
He left me there to rot
So cold the river runs
I float lightly on the current
All I seek now is my salvation

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  1. Date: 8/14/2013 11:23:00 PM
    I like sad poems, Debbie. This one was very interesting and filled with feeling. gosh, it does not relate to the last poem I read about the lost love, does it?

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/15/2013 1:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nope it is not related to my lost love ;}
  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:36:00 PM
    Simply worded, and very descriptive. Most of the time, you don't need a lot of words to express good ideas.

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 3:47:00 PM
    a deep lovely write, floating on the current till you are to float onto a stopping point where you know you'll be happy, enjoyed your write,..p.d.

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 3:02:00 PM
    And that my dear will come in time... In simple words "Life hands us crap" but its what we do with it and who we become is the test.. Just my thoughts..