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  1. Date: 3/11/2011 11:57:00 PM
    This is really an intimate poem, his presence hounds insistently having a resonance into your life. A lovely read this morning. (^_^) Noel.

  1. Date: 3/3/2011 2:24:00 AM
    Interesting poem here. I find a heavy sadness in the lines of your verse. Never heard the song that inspired your write. Hope to soone. Jancarl

  1. Date: 2/28/2011 1:13:00 PM
    Sheesh! Is that song an "oldie" already? Beautiful yet sad poem.

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 4:16:00 AM
    Wow, great what you have penned here. Will go to my favs!...All the best!...Gert:)

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 10:47:00 PM
    Good descriptive wording and rhyming in this easy to read presentation. Is this based on the U2 song?

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 6:18:00 PM
    reminds me of Wuthering Heights

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 12:49:00 PM
    Sad outcome to your main character..Sorry that the waves claimed her life..Creative idea..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 11:33:00 AM
    I absolutely love this song Celene, they had a concert in Cape Town last night, so this brings back memories of last night, enjoyed this loads tonight :) Wilma

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 3:58:00 PM
    Smile ~ It is truly a pleasure and a joy to behold, "Your Magical Brush," again my dear; "Splashing These Canvas' Within Vibrant Colours of Rarity Hues; 'The Beauty of You!!!'" ~ Again, "My Love to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forevermore,'" John! ~ Smile, "Sweeet Dreams unto 'You My Dear, Beautiful Tinkerbell;'" Bye!:) ~

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 3:50:00 PM
    Smile ~ Sooo much depth once more extracted from the oceans priceless waters of, "Your Beautiful Heart 'My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Lovely Cinderella!!!'" ~ "Your Beauty," has mastered profound expressions thus drawn very wonderfully my dear but, stay away from the turbid seas for, "Your 'Majesty,' Belongs Forever 'Amid The Celestial Heavens;' As 'A Goddess of Endless Beauty!!!'" ~ Cont:)

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 11:13:00 AM
    I enjoyed this work..TAH

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:44:00 AM
    i love the poem. reminds always of the true love that is hard to come by. love, lightning ink.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 3:24:00 PM
    That's one of my favorite songs too, Celene. It seems you are reaching out and seeking someone. I hope you find him! Best to you, Diane

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 12:57:00 PM
    thanks for your useful ideas Mr Campi,i definitely use them,thanks.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:14:00 AM
    Hi Celene, thanks for your comment on my poem "no one has called" I enjoyed the poem you posted here. I wish to make a comment, as a retired instructor, it is still in my blood. In the second line of your 4th verse: why not write: "i saw your face/yet you were not there" I am not one for contractions. THe next line could be: "could someone listen, could anyone hear?" These are just suggestions. I really do like your work. Take care, be kind to your muse and Carpe Diem, Jancarl

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:03:00 AM
    You received great inspiration from the U2 song, Celene. When we are sad, it seems we are always searching, crying and wondering if anyone cares. Just know that I care, dear, and I hope you find the flame to light passion in your beautiful heart. Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 7:10:00 AM
    Love the song AND your writing here, Celene. WAs this posted at FB? YOur poetry always has a haunting sadness, and I enjoy that actually because you couple it with such beautiful imagery. Luv, Andrea