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Goodbye, Why Not

You told me this once,twice.
It's never ending. When? When?
Will you give me a final goodbye.
My heart can't hide what I feel.
Why can't you return what I gave?
Can't you see my tears?
Can't you hear my cries?
If you were true.
I would wait to see, if I'm enough.
Even if I'm not your first love, I could have been your last.
How can I forget you. I'll long for you. Once again.

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  1. Date: 2/15/2011 5:54:00 AM

    "Even if I"m not your first love, I could have been your last." That's a truly deep line. So very true. I understand these lines all too well. Great job, Ashley.

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 4:44:00 AM

    Creative and expressive write on Goodbye, ashley