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Last Good-Bye

This is where you opened my naked soul
The dark cold river in within the dead eyed fish
The black swans eying the lonely moon
You rise like a spear clutching a gun... my gun
The gun that burned stoned woods with the heat of my love
The gun that opened the skies and rained it with agony
Agony of a lonesome lover trying to kill the devil within him
Trying to escape the foggy grounds and blooded graves
You walked towards me with soft nude footsteps
My heart doth tumble to the sound of an angel breath
Striking my blind eyes with the sun of your golden heart
The heart that turned stony coffins to gold and black hearts to spring lullabies
You halt and search for air as your eyes turn lavish red
Your lungs feel like stone and rigid rocks but no river there to water the pain
You bend towards me and tears crash on me like hailing grenades
I shout out your name and tell you I'm here...
But I am trapped in the lonesome grounds of the dead Gods
You look at me and strike a smile then cry
You hold up the gun while saying the last good-bye:
"We once were one and now you left me
Left me alone in the dark even when you promised that you won’t
You left a broken soul that no mending can it receive 
But you are mine and we are entwined
As I'll crash in the bed of roses over your grave
And fill the earth with my blood...
The blood of your love I will spill it to the ground
The blood that will ingrain trees of love birds
The blood that will tell the dead who we are
The blood that will teach Romeo and Juliet what is love..."
… Bang... I hear the sound of death...
I hear you are lying next to me once again 
... But now forever.

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  1. Date: 2/24/2011 10:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win Sami in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Anything But Rhyme". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 10:46:00 AM
    Yes this is a gripping story from you Sami!Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:22:00 PM
    Great impact poem, Sami. and I like NIkko's word here "gripping!" Yes, that is it! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 10:15:00 PM
    Congrats Sami on your very gripping write :)

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 8:35:00 PM
    Hey thank you everyone this means a lot to me! I didn't know i won until i read your comments!! Hehe well again thank you all for being supportive, love you all, Sami

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 6:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this dark poem! I really dig the unique word-play and imagery throughout~Chris

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 4:32:00 PM
    Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Sami

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 4:20:00 PM
    Great story. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 2:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win! RAY

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 1:03:00 PM
    Totally captivately, please keep growing in your craft, try new forms too! Congrad's on this fine win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 7:02:00 AM
    All set YOU are correct there are NO misspellings MY BAD ;) all is well thanks so much for the entry and the fine compliment, please leave a blog comment if you have time! Light & love

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 6:33:00 AM
    Most excellent and powerful write BUT you need to do spell check and the form is Free Verse not Light Poetry, please correct SO you can get the acclaim you deserve. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 3:42:00 PM
    I enjoyed this It had an unexpected ending of mystery..... Thank you ......