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Concrete Ribbons

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Concrete Ribbons

On roads to nowhere/everywhere
white crosses dot the countryside seeking
a final resting place abandoned now to 
wait for plastic flowers to be placed as if 
somehow this will bring closure to loved ones 
who mourn their passing from interstate to ether state
from sadness to glory from son daughter mother father 
grandfather orphan to eternal rest. 
White crosses maybe one maybe five 
returning to death no longer alive. 
one brief instant horror to blessed rest
on a cold siding/a concrete ribbon/
a drainage ditch/a nowhere road.
Are they resting there or are they crying 
to let them be with others in this clay
state that means nothing.
now the remains of yesterday clinging to memories faded as
the plastic flowers/teddy bears/grayed out names that 
mean nothing to but a simple few who will 
not let them rest.
Oh my soul mourns to let them free 
let Jeanette go free Bill S. on that lonely road
let B.R. road worker lay his tools and vest and
hard hat down Fred S. is a memory nothing more 
nothing less/let them rest … we long to be at rest 
not be looked upon by passersby who 
wonder why our crosses are in the middle of 
Nowhere/we are nowhere to be found.
We cry for justice of the past/let us sleep where 
we are not where the metal and pain and stench and broken
glass found us …

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  1. Date: 2/25/2011 11:06:00 AM
    Congratulations Jeff,on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "For The Sake Of Free Verse". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 8:45:00 AM
    Good to see you in the top 10 Jeff. Congratulations on your inspiring Free verse and it honored seventh place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 10:57:00 PM
    wow, you took a much different perspective on those white crosses at accident scenes. Very unique writing, jeff. YOu certainly deserved a win for THIS. Congratulations to you!

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 6:35:00 PM
    I have seen these monuments too often. Great writing, Jeff. lainie

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 5:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on this win in the contest of Chris, jeff

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 7:02:00 AM
    Congrats Jeff on your wonderful win in the free verse contest .. enjoy your top ten win with luv..for an excellent entry..

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 1:44:00 AM
    A sad poem, but it was good enough to win in Chris's contest. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 10:52:00 PM
    Hi Jeff and congrats on your win with this unique and thought provoking piece, there's definitely so much more beyond those graves and markers...

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 10:18:00 PM
    Jeff, thank you for supporting my contest with this fantastic and unique winner!~Chris