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In the Old Testament

Between the pages
I find our love still glowing
First rose you gave  me


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  1. Date: 7/7/2011 5:17:00 PM

    and HE is the lilly of the valley thanks for sharing and your comment

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 3:49:00 PM

    A wonderful write. Nice to see you saved the first rose given to you. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 10:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Lainie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 3:27:00 AM

    congrats on this 1st place winning poem! three lines that say so much, I like the image of love expressed in a rose pressed between pages...and thank you for your generous comments on my poem 'still life'...

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:51:00 AM

    spot on, fabulous, congrats, Déirdre

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:29:00 AM

    Wonderful what one finds in a bible. Love it. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:43:00 AM

    I loved this poem the first time I read it and I still do, and congratulations on your placement in Linda's contest~~

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:42:00 AM

    very well done and many congrats for this big win... wonderful my dear..luv Michael

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 11:53:00 PM

    Many Congrats Elaine for top notch position in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:19:00 PM

    What a beautiful sentimental write! Vince

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:17:00 PM

    for this contest it could not help but be a winner Elaine. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 3:44:00 PM

    This is so sweet Elaine. I sure would smile if I found that first rose tucked away in the Bible. Best to you, Diane

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 1:52:00 PM

    Precious and elegant, Lainie. Congratulations to you.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:26:00 AM

    A real stunner Elaine, congratulations on your awesome win ;-)

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:24:00 AM

    Congrats Elaine on your 1st place win with this wonderful Senryu.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:14:00 AM

    Congrats on your 1st place win in the contest.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:26:00 AM

    Hello Elaine, This is simply lovely, well done and congratulations on your win my dear As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest, 'Laine! Enjoy your win! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 12:45:00 AM

    what a very sweet and romantic senryu! You got me smiling with this Lainie :) congrats on your win :) -- nikko ;)

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 8:43:00 PM

    awwh, endearing... CLAP CLAP for the super win, elaine! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 7:45:00 PM

    awesome. Many congrats for this huge win.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 6:49:00 PM

    Great idea for a love scrip, Elaine. Congratulations, good to see you at the top. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 6:20:00 PM

    Elaine, congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this fine entry. The first time I saw this, I knew it had a good chance.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:57:00 PM

    Oh...love the sentimental momento of this poem!! So glad to share this place with you, Elaine....a lovely poem of remembrance! ~ love, Carrie

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:42:00 PM

    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Elaine

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:21:00 PM

    Congrats Elaine on your first place win in my contest.. this poem blew me away .. thankxx for your support luv..

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 4:43:00 AM

    Great one..That pressed rose still there as a reminder of the first love..Sara

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 1:31:00 AM

    this is a wonderful one

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 1:44:00 PM

    is'nt it wonderful to have. jhl

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 11:22:00 PM

    oh, this one is a precious little bud!! It's so late. I'm off to bed soon. Nice seeing this one before I take off. LUv, Andrea

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