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Free Style

its crazy how we got this way
its like we had lost our way
tip toeing so we wont step on each others toes
like we have no clue on where to go
did that one crazy event  change us
to appoint its surprising when we act on how we feel
and questioning ourselves to see if what just happened was truly real
i wish i had the power to turn back time
so maybe things could turn out right
but they say things happened for a reason
so maybe there's a reasons for this as well
hopefully for us time will tell...

I wish we could stay together 
expressing our love for one another forever
but things didn’t turn out that way
and it hurts me so I have this last thing to say
no matter where life takes me your still my number one
when things get hard for me I’ll will remember our love
even though it didn’t last and I as write this my heart shatters like glass
you’ll still be my first love as well as my very first kiss
and I’ll forever know that no one could ever love me like this

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  1. Date: 3/7/2011 10:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Fantise. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 11:28:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup Fantise. I know this is a late welcome but, I have had some very pressing matters going on. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 8:06:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 4:38:00 PM
    Very passionate work about your one true love..Enjoyed..Sara