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In Hope

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In Hope

As morning dew scintillates in sunlight
I seek a bright freshness ascendent in truth
beyond twisted coital sheets of dark night
in dreams recaptured from innocent youth.

As fine red wine needs airing for flavor
a shared breath in a soft passionate kiss
is a goal in and of itself to truly savor
in concert with respect, in quiet  bliss.

As  symphonies live in harmony's sound
I live to hear intelligent romance
in conversation's joy, where topics abound
and words flow musical in joyous dance.

I will live in hope and die in despair
for truth will sing and my heart will repair

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  1. Date: 2/11/2011 6:33:00 AM

    This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read....I especially love the line "in concert with respect, in quiet bliss." So deep and insightful. Hoping the last line is true....no other word I can think of but just beautiful....

  1. Date: 2/11/2011 6:13:00 AM

    Stephen this common bond of feeling luv's pain has touched us all ... appreciate the sweet comments on my Concerto written from past experience luv... and may we all remain In Hope.... as u so aptly wrote luv..

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 11:44:00 PM

    wow, Stephen a rare and beautiful sonnet here at the Soup. I don't usually see one so elegant as this. And quite profound. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 9:08:00 AM

    for truth will sing and my heart will repair. Thank God for th last line, Stephen. best of wishes with this gem. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/10/2011 6:55:00 AM

    Luv the fine red wine Stephen .. u are becoming the King of the Sonnet my friend.. living in hope plus luv is an awesome delight my friend ...enjoyed with luv..

  1. Date: 2/9/2011 9:57:00 PM

    My last read for the night and it's a very lovely Sonnet, expressed from the heart. I believe one day there will be universal love, Stephen...one day. It may not be in our time but it will be. Have a good night. Always, Annalise