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Celene Crescent
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Faded Horizon
above the sea another ocean and just as blue
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Wilma Neels
Date: 2/21/2011 5:17:00 AM
Celene, I absolutely love this, really beautiful :) love Wilma
binibining P.iNk
Date: 2/14/2011 1:17:00 AM
sorry I missed this earlier! this is really pretty-- and never thought of it that way, as having another ocean up above-- very unique, Celene :) enjoyed this one :) hugs to you :)
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/13/2011 3:17:00 PM
Just revisiting this beauty, and hey, don't you have some new ones to post? I could swear I saw you doing some at FB which I do not see here yet. HOpe you are having a great weekend! andrea
John Rhinem
Date: 2/12/2011 8:02:00 AM
Smile ~ I have noticed that, "Your Radiance," has but another I Am certain, jewel brushed for the trove of collected treasures so, I shall humbly return that, I may delight my eyes amid, "Your 'Beautiful Light!!!'" ~ Smile, so until then, "Have The Most 'Blessed & Beautiful' of Days My Dear, Somewhere Beyond The Oceans Tides & Blue Sky Rides Wherein Lives, 'Neverendings, Beautiful Love;' Bye, 'My Dear Lovely & Sweeet, Beautiful, Tinkerbell!'":) ~
John Rhinem
Date: 2/12/2011 7:51:00 AM
Smile ~ I love the picturesque images evoked from this lovely sweet canvas; brushed in merely, "9", precious words and, "Yes, Their 'Beautiful Entwining Colours' Do So Mesh, 'Majestically,' Unto 'All of, Eternity!!!'" ~ It is very nice to behold once more, "Your Beauty," my dear and, I hope that "Your Treasures" are doing splendidly ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forevermore,'" John! ~ Cont:)
John Rhinem
Date: 2/12/2011 7:33:00 AM
Smile ~ Still breathing my dear; waltzing with "Your Endless Beauty," through the azure skies so melting into, the aqua blue seas; spinning amid the deepest ocean as, pirouetting in its dreams ~ "Your Majesty," Always did bring about the best within my humble Soul; poetically wise at least although, what would my meager words Ever be compared unto, "You!!!" ~ Cont:)
John Rhinem
Date: 2/12/2011 7:20:00 AM
Smile ~ I wanted to take a moment to breathe in this very fragrance that my heart remembers as if it were but yesterday, "My Dear, Precious & Priceless, 'Beyond Beautiful, Cinderella!!!'" ~ Yes, the Souls Entwine amid the bluest and, "Your Beauty," I could never decide, nor could I define, which was "Yours" and which was mine; within a fairytale that lives upon the pages still, deep within my heart and, forever in my eyes; "Beautiful Tinkerbell!!!" ~ Cont:)
john freeman
Date: 2/10/2011 9:34:00 AM
Celene, Sure, that'll work Good notion, great Haiku. Agape, Moses
Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/9/2011 4:02:00 PM
Good one.Enjoyed..Sara
Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 2/9/2011 3:56:00 PM
You have very beautifully used the word blue, though I don't think it's for the contest. How are you, celene, not much seen on the PS. hiope everything is alright.
Daniel Cheeseman
Date: 2/9/2011 2:13:00 PM
Majestic words nice to see you back
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/9/2011 1:36:00 PM
wow, SO NICE. And wow, you are doing a contemporary haiku with very brief lines. LOVE It (7).
frank herrera
Date: 2/9/2011 12:15:00 PM
Awesome write!! BEAutiful and original!
kash poet
Date: 2/9/2011 11:56:00 AM
Wonderful picture you have penned here Celene!Enjoyed---kashinath
Chris D. Aechtner
Date: 2/9/2011 10:13:00 AM
Celene, bravo on writing this haiku....geez, why didn't I think of this one!? Great stuff here. Really dig the short but sweet syllable count~Chris
Jancarl Campi
Date: 2/9/2011 10:07:00 AM
This is beautiful. I too have seen a sky as blue as an ocean. Thanks for the memory and thanks for your comment on my work, Jancarl
Annalise Brigham
Date: 2/9/2011 10:04:00 AM
No surprise that your eyes captured this....most often on a beautiful sunny day the blue ocean blends with the brilliant blue sky creating that 'faded horizon'. Always, Annalise
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/9/2011 9:34:00 AM
Surely the sky can be perceived as an ocean of air. Beautifully written, Celene. Hope you are doing well, my friend. Miss you. Love, Carolyn
Celene Crescent
Date: 2/9/2011 8:55:00 AM
tnx daver,but i think it has to be a tanka for the blue contest and it takes me a million time to do that :)
Tobey Hill
Date: 2/9/2011 8:54:00 AM
where the sky and sea meet...nice write CC..TAH
daver austin
Date: 2/9/2011 8:38:00 AM
You should send this in to the "blue" contest. Love it. Love, Daver
