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The perfect THUNDER STORM

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The perfect THUNDER STORM

As the sky breaks, I see u, and darkness passes bye....
Rumbling from the thunder sends chills down my spine, 
forcing my lips to part with a sigh...
I smelt u then felt u aching in my bones, 
Before the clouds even began to cry...
Like a force of nature u move through my world,
Uncontrollable to me and like the weather man I strive to know why...
U come and go as u please,sometimes splashing momentarily,
Awaiting your fall from sky.....
The wait can seem unbearable but without it,s touch I would die..
But through the night the tapping on my window says I'm here come outside...
The Feel of passion in every drop makes the lightening flash,as the rain slowly subside...
Leaving me replenished watching as your departure makes me rainbows in the 
sky...
Love making is like a perfect"THUNDER STORM" made between U n I....

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  1. Date: 2/7/2011 10:25:00 AM
    well and wonderful written, it rained on Friday evening in my country Nigeria. your poem reminded me of that day.

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 10:05:00 PM
    Nothing like getting caught in a thunder storm of passion. Let it rain, let it rain. Joe

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 8:15:00 PM
    a perfect "thunder storm" indeed, very lovely write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.