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Broken Within

The rage inside of me is clawing its way free
Trying to scream the name that caused this misery
Like nails hammered into my skin
Piercing my flesh to leave all these gaping holes within
Knifes and hooks rape this soft flesh of mine
I don’t care anymore please stop this pain I want to give up and die
I never asked for any help but you gave it anyway 
Now you leave me like this all alone in this deep dark shell
If I want to shrivel up and go black within my core
Let that happen because it’s far too late to start a brawl
Don’t come around now and pretend you care
You know it’s true when I say you ignored my pain and pretended it wasn’t there
Because that was easier for you than to admit that you just simply don’t care
I have lost you now that much is clear you have left me forever
And that is far too much for me to bear.

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  1. Date: 2/5/2011 2:41:00 PM
    deep, i feel the rage in this write, it hurts when they show us how much they don't care after all we gave, and the time we waisted, but we must at least say hey good times lol, enjoyed your write.....p.d.

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 1:36:00 PM
    Deep hurting emotion Aimee. If this write has been created through reality. I honestly hope it dicipates, and one day you'll close your eyes, open them and write about a reality that's friendlier to you. Many thank you's for enjoying my poetry. My aim is to entertain readers, as I so enjoy what I write. Keep writing Aimee, and I'll be sure to read. Soup Mail me when you post....:)