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Me still as statue

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Me still as statue

shadow beautiful 
outline smooth as wife 
but mannequine

touched her softly still
dreaming oneness through feel 
though statue stood still

wife shook my sweet dream  
real replacing plastic feel
me still as statue  

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By Hitendra Mehta
February 2011

Honours - 9th Place  
Members Contest - Special Sentimental Senryu 
Sponsor - Linda Marie - The Sweetheart of P.S.

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  1. Date: 2/24/2011 10:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Hitendra. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 11:42:00 AM
    Congrats Hitendra on your win :) -- really like how you ended this , made it come full circle :) very sweet & nicely written -- enjoyed reading this :D

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 2:37:00 PM
    the verses are verying touching! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:41:00 AM
    Congrats on being among the winners. Thanks for nice comments DÉirdre

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:03:00 AM
    Congrats!!! for your well written entry in Lindas contest

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 4:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on you win in Linda's contest with this profound Senryu~~

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 12:00:00 AM
    Beautiful Senryu, dear Hitendra. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:11:00 PM
    oh, and now to rate it! 7 of course.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:10:00 PM
    oh, my goodness, this is absolutely wonderful, HItendra, the way you took it to YOU still as a statue, struck dumb with awe at the end. Wow, congratulations. A fave!

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:50:00 PM
    This is a wonderful write from you Hitendra !Congrats on your win---kashinath

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:06:00 PM
    very very good and imaginative Hitendra. Congratulations to you!

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 12:02:00 PM
    Hitendra, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;-)

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:11:00 AM
    Hello Hitendra, Congratulations on your win my dear poet. I love the words you have penned here As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Hitendra. Enjoy it! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 9:11:00 PM
    so unique and deserving of the great win, hitendra.. CONGRATS! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 8:21:00 PM
    Beautiful. Many congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 7:49:00 PM
    Good triple entry here Hitendra. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 7:31:00 PM
    Congratulations Hitendra, on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 6:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Hitendra

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:46:00 PM
    Congrats Hitendra on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support always ...

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