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Raven's Dream

Through the sky's sharp edge
A mystery springs,
As birds aim their preys.
Misty tombs of rock,
Spilling grief like wine.

Exit from time,
A lapse of blow.
A trip to find
The Limbo's Island.

None left,
Just her guarding
Last bliss points.

With guns
Of lust

Empty.


valeria iliadou - Among The Dead

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  1. Date: 2/6/2011 5:03:00 AM

    Thank you for supporting my contest.

  1. Date: 2/5/2011 6:47:00 AM

    Super sensational write Valeria .. good luck in Constance's contest with this piece on Raven... wonderful story .. especiall the Limbo Island luv..

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 6:22:00 PM

    awww, deep, "guns of lust" good write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.