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Below is the poem entitled wonder which was written by poet Elizabeth Bark. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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i wonder what would happen...
if i told you my true feelings...
or at least admitted them to myself...
then maybe i could live my life...the way i want to live it...

i wonder what would happen...
if you admitted the feelings you had for me...
if there are actual feelings for me...

i sit and think about what would happen...
i want us to be together...
and no one to be critical...
no one to get in our buisness...
and let us be happy...
cuz i think we can be happy together... 
but you have to give it a chance...

then i wake up...
and i realize that all i dream about is...you...
all i think about is...you...
all i want is...you...
but...i thought i was supposed to love someone else...
i cant get you out of my wandering mind...

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  1. Date: 2/9/2011 2:52:00 PM
    A role model, well thats a first...lol.. Soup Mail my dear...

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 2:08:00 PM
    Lizzy my dear Angel... There is no one in this life that doesn't feel and wonder just like you. A good part of my life I did just that.. I hope Im wiser now but I try to think things out before jumping..In the case of love , darling you have to follow your heart, I know easire said then done.. But in time it will make up who you are .. I hope that helped.. For an example of my indecisions read Sprng In winter.. Love you friend forever Michael

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 4:39:00 PM
    Very creative and interesting write on wonder, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 10:43:00 AM
    aww...beth...that is so good!! you always did come up with amazing poems i love ya sissy!! <3 ~kayte-boo~

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 10:37:00 AM
    its a really good poem. just try to back down on some of the periods.