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warmth

the sun shining through
with rays piercing panes of glass
warming weary bones

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  1. Date: 2/2/2011 4:46:00 PM

    Very nice use of imagery, Robert. Can relate to that "warming weary bones." The sun is such a blessing! Best wishes and thanks for stopping by, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 8:27:00 AM

    Amazing lines Robert depicting the warmth of the sun ..luv your last line immensely.. thankxx for your sweet comments on my poetry always welcome luv..