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seasons

with winter upon
and fall left to far behind
bringing spring summer

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  1. Date: 2/1/2011 3:00:00 PM

    Roll on Spring and Summer, both seasons bring the smiles back to our faces....:)

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 8:08:00 AM

    brig it on! good one Robert.

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 6:42:00 AM

    thanks for the great feedback

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 10:02:00 PM

    Nice one, Robert! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 7:07:00 PM

    Good haiku with nice images, Robert

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 5:44:00 PM

    good write on seasons in this haiku, enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 5:02:00 PM

    I've never had a real talent for the haiku, but I've always found it cool. The last line stands out: "bringing spring summer." The words flow together, yet their sounds are kind of "bouncy"/springy. No pun intended...

  1. Date: 1/30/2011 5:01:00 PM

    Good one..We are all about ready for the next season..Sara