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Written by: Kib G  Send Soup Mail  
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THE SWEET TEMPTATIONS OF LIFE

They say"Life,s like a box of chocolates"
But I would say it,s like a "Can of Nuts"
Rough,salty n hard to chew...
"Although I must say" 
When the smoothness of the chocolate, 
And the roughness of the nuts come together!!!!
It makes Life a Hellova lot more interesting!!! "Tasty too"....
UNTIL THE MELT DOWN"....
But honesty if somethin can,t maintain n the sun!!!!
An only at it's best in the cold an darkness, How can it really be good? Hmmmmmmm...(~_~) ALTHOUGH BADDDDD CAN!!! 
SOMETIMES BE GOODDDDD...Hmmmmmmm

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  1. Date: 1/26/2011 5:37:00 AM

    Awesome Kibi .. mixing these two blend into exotic as two lovers who enjoy each other .. luv your expressions at the end .. u have Soup Mail too..luv..