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Within Blue Eyes

She sings sweetly a song borne of love She is a child of God and the mother of doubt she'll push and shove then hide as she dances all about lost in the wane of soft moonlight A powerful beauty contained within blue eyes, a golden stare of burning fire raging on starry night She's an essence of what cannot be restrained a shadow flirting deep into the foggy mist She's been waiting for a long slow kiss to set her free not realizing she's already there

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  1. Date: 1/4/2012 5:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Karen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 4:34:00 PM

    a very pretty poem. I love "she's an essence of what cannot be restrained." It's like she really bursts out of this work, so that not even this poem can contain her.

  1. Date: 4/11/2011 2:29:00 PM

    very beautiful and warm hearted poem.

  1. Date: 3/13/2011 2:33:00 PM

    A beautifully written piece Carol, loved it....:)

  1. Date: 3/12/2011 10:47:00 AM

    enjoyed the uncertainty and promise in this piece Karen,within its a flow of verse is beauty conveyed.

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 5:12:00 PM

    Good one...Enjoyed..Sara

  1. Date: 2/12/2011 2:31:00 PM

    This writing reminds me a bit of a song recorded by the Who. Your wording is very descriptive and a delight to read.

  1. Date: 1/28/2011 12:27:00 PM

    what eyes she has! :)

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 8:11:00 AM

    absolutely lovely