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bedtime

cool egyptian cotton sheets
heated up as passion builds
sweating bodies glide supple
crimson starburst sighs

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  1. Date: 2/9/2011 12:47:00 PM
    Beautiful Dodoitsu..very sensual.. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/29/2011 2:25:00 PM
    Very hot and steamy, my friend. There's more than one way to stay warm when the winter winds are forcing people to stay inside. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 4:28:00 PM
    Rocks my world Stephen.. a great Dodoitsu exuding passion and luv .. a crimson starburst sighs... awesome line luv..

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 9:23:00 AM
    one could get starry eyed reading this hottie, Stephen, very nice dodoitsu-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 5:29:00 AM
    a sensual write, love it :)

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 4:37:00 AM
    Very sensual sweating bodies in this time of the year, Stephen. enjoyed it

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 11:22:00 PM
    SEXY one! NICE.