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My Final Goodbye

My Guardian Angel,
If I could get a warning,
Before God came to take me to Heven,
I would wake in the morning
Right about seven; 
Get down on my knees to pray
And then I would wake you. 
Knowing that this is my last day,
I realize what I've always wanted to do.
Looking into your eyes,
With my head on your chest;
I have never been good at goodbyes,
But I let you know that I feel truly blessed;
I have cherished these years.
Before I fade away into the sky,
I will wipe your tears 
And tell you "bye-bye".



For the contest
If I had One Last Day to Live
Sponsor, Walayee Whitlock
January, 2011


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  1. Date: 4/12/2011 1:37:00 AM

    excellent write, Kaci! I enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 6:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Kaci. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 9:52:00 PM

    Congratulations on winning, Kaci Jo.

  1. Date: 2/22/2011 9:33:00 AM

    Awesome job Kaci good to see your most worthy poem in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your poem's honored 15th place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 11:56:00 AM

    Thank you all :) I feel so honored to have such talented poets reading my poetry.. :)

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 6:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of walayee, kaci

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:56:00 PM

    Congrats Kaci Jo on your winning poem in Lay's contest.. enjoy with luv...

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 5:11:00 AM

    sad by definition of the contest, but nicely handled, I enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 5:56:00 PM

    A very good entry for Walayee's contest. You have both great descriptiveness and rhyming in this submission.

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 8:35:00 PM

    a beautiful entry for the contest, most enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 12:54:00 PM

    Please let me know if this is a new form of Chant Royal.

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 5:13:00 AM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. hope u have entered this in the contest posted.. good luck with luv..

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 3:40:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kaci. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol