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Raven Made Her Choice

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Raven Made Her Choice

                      
Perched upon his resting place, Raven made her call She planned to join her lover, using powder and a ball Gazing at the markers where the predeceased were laid She watched her namesake circle, and heard his woeful voice, Then mused the circumstances that took her partner’s life. Could sacrifice unite them? Is there an afterlife? And listening to the chilling call, Raven made her choice. For ~~A Rambling Poet~~ and the contest: Among The Dead by Ray Dillard

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  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:51:00 AM
    Love every word of every line!

    Dillard Avatar Ray Dillard
    Date: 12/27/2012 1:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne, for stopping by to read an old selection. Glad you liked it! RAY
  1. Date: 2/25/2011 5:07:00 PM
    Yes to live and grieve forever...very sad...endlessly sad. Good one Ray. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 11:56:00 AM
    I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Ray. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/19/2011 7:14:00 AM
    Many congratulations Ray on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 11:12:00 PM
    this is a wonderful write!Congrats Ray on your win.

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win..Very creative work.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 6:37:00 AM
    Just the thought of reuniting in the afterlife provided a positive ending to a sad act of suicide for Raven. I've heard those who take their own lives are forbidden from heaven, but how are we to know? Excellent poem, Ray. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:37:00 AM
    unique and stunning, ray... best CHEERS for the superb win!:) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 12:30:00 AM
    Great sotry,Ray. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:33:00 PM
    Quite an impressive piece you have penned here, Ray. Congratulations on winning with this entry in Constance's contest.

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:17:00 PM
    Congratulations Ray on your awesome poem's eighth place win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:38:00 PM
    Congratulations onn the eighth place win in the contest of constance, Ray

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:54:00 PM
    Congrats Ray on your wonderful win in Among the Dead contest with this exceptional entry my friend and partner.. enjoy another grand victory with luv..

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 7:42:00 PM
    Very nice poem Ray..good luck in the contest...Jimmy

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 7:08:00 PM
    A very good entry for the contest, good luck on the contes,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 7:48:00 AM
    Thanks for supporting my contest.

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 3:47:00 AM
    Wonderful interpretation of the theme of the contest, Good luck, Ray