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My love for you

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My love for you

Do you ever feel like...
You have made the wrong choise?
You...are hurting someone...that...you love...
I feel like that everyday...when I see them...
I had him all to myself...and...I took him for granted...
And now all he does is let her hurt him...over...and over...
I would never do that...again...I already went through it once...
But she does it over again everyday...I dont see how...
How she could do that and still breathe...
I love him so much it hurts...hurts to breathe sometimes...
I feel like Im...broken...in half...
The one half says, "forget him..."
The other one says, "steal him away..."
I try to listen to the one who says forget him...
But I usually hear the one that wants me to steal him...
Cuz he is the one I am supposed to be with...
I might be 14...but I know...
I know that I'm in love with him...
That he loves me
That we are supposed to be together...
I also know...I will die before she hurts him again...
Even if I die trying to stop it...
Let's just hope that it doesn't come down to that...

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  1. Date: 1/24/2011 3:04:00 PM
    ah, I missed my poet friend... thanks always for your kind words toward my work... and thank your teacher too.. your writes on love go above beyond always... keep your heart close because its a special one...love Michael

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 1:32:00 PM
    Emotionally expressive Elizabeth... luv hurts as well as heals sometimes.. wonderful creative poetry luv..

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 10:40:00 AM
    The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Elizabeth. Love, Carol