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a blizzard

a blizzard
furies of fractured vision
punctured pillows

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  1. Date: 1/21/2011 8:32:00 AM

    Good way of describing a snow storm as a pillow fight in heaven.

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 11:28:00 AM

    Wonderful description in this one, Deb! I can see how clouds would appear to be "punctured pillows" when heavy snow is falling. Best wishes if this is the one you entered in Charles' contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 10:35:00 AM

    Excellent Haiku, these of your's I've been reading. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 6:28:00 AM

    Intensely descriptive lines Deb.. good luck in the contest... the alliteration is a plus my friend.. luv..

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 5:59:00 PM

    Very meaningful haiku with apt images, deb

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 2:28:00 PM

    Love it Deb, and very clever describing the fresh snow as pillows. It's virginal carpet will welcome many of natures gems after it's fall. Terrific Haiku....:)