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But when the rain falls

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But when the rain falls

The dryness of the land 
reminds me of my lost dreams
the ones that could 
not find their ways
in droughtful seasons
the whistling of dry leafless 
trees blown by a sharp wind 
is a song of sadness to me
a song which tells a story
that my tongue will not pronounce
for my tears will refuse
to remain calm in the eyes
But when the rain falls
i feel deep down inside
a wave of fresh inspirations 
sweeping through
and a new song of hapiness
telling a story 
of a great, joy filled future
                                                

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  1. Date: 9/25/2011 8:11:00 PM
    Bojosi, you brought a refreshing shower to my spirit with your poem.I love it. Thanks .William

  1. Date: 1/31/2011 3:31:00 AM
    A beautiful write Bojosi, thank you for your kind comments ;)

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 11:15:00 PM
    very beautiful, i really enjoyed this is piece

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 9:15:00 AM
    Beautiful job Bojosi! Dry places have a lot to say at times. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 9:17:00 AM
    Very descriptive and expressive work...I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Your presence at my work was so encouraging..Sara

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 8:28:00 AM
    Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Bojosi. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol