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Princess of my dreams

there was a hollowness in my heart
turning into a blackhole consuming my soul like a hungry fox

when i met the princess of my dreams
it turned my life upside down confusing me like a lost sailor in the sea

it is the begining of a wonderful story 
if it only ends beautifully so my closing line can finish like a fairy tale

i want to hold her hand and dance all night long
and bring her closer to me, become one like the shiny sun in the morning sky

i cant take a nap without putting her to sleep in my thoughts
every waking moment is worth its while like a warrior battleing for a marvelous victory

cant utter a word of love when she is around
so i wrote a letter proud of myself with the content of the prose like a koel in the nest
of crows

now i fear and sweat thinking what she might say
"you are not my match you are not the one i dream about he is like the king who conquered all"

but the four words from her mouth "i love you too"
will fill my hollowness with bright suns light points the land to the clueless sailor 

will win the war of love after a heroic battle
gives my heart wings of a koel to fly for the place where it truely belongs

makes me the crownless king of your beautiful heart
and now i may end my story by singing "happily ever after" till the last breathe in my lungs








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  1. Date: 2/22/2013 4:33:00 AM

    Princess indeed!good job.

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 5:47:00 AM

    An inventive and lyrical write.

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 6:59:00 AM

    i get your feelings.

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 6:33:00 AM

    very nicely done.. This was a very vivid story of love.. I enjoyed reading it today.. Cory

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 9:19:00 AM

    thank you sara ,I am still finding my words in time I will get even better...

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 5:00:00 AM

    Such a romantic tale..Enjoyed reading this morn..Welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more post like this one...Sara

  1. Date: 1/28/2011 1:01:00 PM

    A very nice narrative... I especially like the multiple similes

  1. Date: 1/26/2011 4:47:00 AM

    this poem touches me greatly

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 4:35:00 AM

    how sweet and romantic! take care,Deb