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ITS POINTLESS

Now here's a contest that seems pointless
But, up to a point, I guess it will do.
The points in my life have sometimes been fruitless,
I just thought I would point that out to you.

Oh, the point of this rhyme
May be pointed one way,
But it is at this point in time
To score points by what I say.

The point that I am making,
Is that there is always some point
That life points in a way forsaking,
Giving your point a grave disjoint.

I have pointed out many times
that points are good and bad.
But the good points I remember better
Rather than the bad points I have had.

You can sometimes see how pointless it is
To try to point these things out.
As for the point I am making,
You get the point...no doubt!

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  1. Date: 1/25/2011 4:13:00 AM

    Congrats Daniel on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 1:27:00 PM

    a good result Daniel, good to see the placment.

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 12:23:00 PM

    Hi Daniel - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 11:55:00 AM

    Congrats Dan on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this excellent entry my friend... u sure made the point in your awesome lines... enjoy another sweet success with luv..

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 11:46:00 AM

    Congrats, Dan. Well deserved win. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 10:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Daniel

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 10:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the contest, Daniel.... Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 9:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Dan C in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 3:22:00 AM

    I get the point, really good poem:))

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 2:45:00 PM

    enjoyed this pointed piece Daniel.

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 12:37:00 PM

    Oh my goodness.....you have incorporated every way to make your point!!! Just great!!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 11:58:00 AM

    This is a good point! Not kidding! I've added this poem to my favorites.

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 10:58:00 AM

    clear, crisp and candid, dan.. hoping for winning slot in the contest... great work here! :) nette

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 10:39:00 AM

    Dan, some interesting points you pointed out in this one ;-) if for the Point contest, good luck with this witty write, love Wilma