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About This Poem

Indisposed

Hair there, why cry, pull it out ..try!
Pretty YES on your head but nose?
God that’s gross you’re not a guy
Pull it out you’re indisposed!

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  1. Kendrick Avatar
    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 1/31/2011 3:07:00 PM
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    Little humor to brighten our day..Congratulations..Sara
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 1/29/2011 7:14:00 PM
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    Yahhooo!! I knew this would do well....so funny!! :)
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 1/28/2011 8:23:00 PM
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    Gross...I loved it..congrats. BG
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 1/28/2011 7:03:00 AM
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    Hair can grow anywhere else on the body and not just on top of the head. Good submission. No wonder it won for you in the contest. Congratulations.
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 1/28/2011 3:57:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win Debbie. Love, Carol
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    Elaine George
    Date: 1/28/2011 2:46:00 AM
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    Congrat's on your big win, Deb. Lainie
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    Kory Calhoun
    Date: 1/27/2011 10:02:00 PM
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    LOL! Great limerick, Deborah. - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Rick's "Bad Hair Day" contest. Best wishes, Kory
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    Tahera Mannan
    Date: 1/27/2011 7:44:00 PM
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    Many congratulations on this win Debbie with this very difficult meter.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/27/2011 7:41:00 PM
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    WAY to GO, Deb. Loved this one. Congratultions.
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    Francine Roberts
    Date: 1/27/2011 6:50:00 PM
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    congrats on your win in the contest Debbie
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    Jimmy Anderson
    Date: 1/27/2011 6:34:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win in the contest....Jimmy
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 1/27/2011 6:33:00 PM
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    Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Deb
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    Ray Dillard
    Date: 1/27/2011 6:32:00 PM
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    Congratulations on this fine poem. Very creative. RAY
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 1/27/2011 6:23:00 PM
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    Very funny Debbie. Congratulations on a big win. Love, Joyce
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 1/27/2011 5:52:00 PM
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    Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Bad Hair Day contest ..

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    kash poet
    Date: 1/27/2011 5:25:00 PM
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    Congratulations Debbie on your big win !This goes to my FAVs to study the Trochaic Tetrameter form--kashinath
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 1/13/2011 7:29:00 PM
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    Very very unique Debbie ... terrific entry for the contest.. good luck luv.. Rick will be rolling in the aisle with this one ...
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    Bozhidar Pangelov
    Date: 1/13/2011 11:14:00 AM
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    I greatly enjoyed this form. Welcome to one original http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wpc-lfKIJWU&feature=related
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 1/13/2011 12:08:00 AM
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    such a surprsing twist, deb... very " out of the box" and utterly imaginative!! nasal strands, lol!! love tis and best of winning wishes from me..:) nette
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/12/2011 5:44:00 PM
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    Deb,a very unique approach to this contest! I am a great hair puller. I nearly killed my poor tweezed eyebrows and a few time I went after these nose hairs. The WORST ones to pull out. OUCHHHHH.
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    James Peranteau
    Date: 1/12/2011 3:11:00 PM
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    Very funny Debbie ! The artist you are, but, ouch...that has to hurt dear poet; even the thought of writing this poem had to hurt ! *smiles* Have a great night, much love, james
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    Sidney Beck
    Date: 1/12/2011 1:04:00 PM
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    Very funny hair/nose stuff....... I do so like funny poems and like to try writing them my self......Thanks for the invite to your competition and of course I will enjoy writing for it....by the way can I ask in your competition is it necessary to write about one's "foreign country" or can it be literally ANY POEM and ANY TOPIC ??
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 1/12/2011 12:51:00 PM
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    now that is truly.....A BAD HAIR DAY LOL !!!
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    Anna-Marie Docherty
    Date: 1/12/2011 12:07:00 PM
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    Hehe what a fun write but hope never get it as a problem! Thanks for your heads up/read....
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    Eamon Duffin
    Date: 1/12/2011 10:08:00 AM
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    Hi Debbie. Thanks for the help. I must pay more attention to detail. you describe the pain that you fair ladies go through to look good for us men who just allow ourselves to go to seed. best of luck in the contest and thanks again. Eamon
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    FABIYAS M V
    Date: 1/12/2011 9:34:00 AM
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    An excellent piece of literature,Deborah.I have modified my poem 'Nimisha'.Thanks a lot.Luv.Fabiyas
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 1/12/2011 9:20:00 AM
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    Nice meaning you have penned for Bad Hair Day, Deb


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