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Moon and Sun Collide

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Moon and Sun Collide

Moon and Sun collide
Line connects open circle
Swim to create life.

(January 11, 2011  Wausau, Wisconsin)

(c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved

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  1. Date: 1/12/2011 8:55:00 AM
    Smile ~ "Sounds As Very 'Magical Moment;' Brushed In Bright; 'Love,'" John!:) ~

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 5:22:00 PM
    Nice haiku, but there's eight syllables in the middle line. How about replacing "intersects" with either "bisects" or "divides"? Everything else looks good.