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Breaking down my walls

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Breaking down my walls

You have broken down the wall, 
That I put up in my heart...
Apparently I didn't make it strong,
Strong enough to keep you out...
Cuz you got right through it,
Even without trying...no effort...
I guess I am so numb that I don't care...
Just please...I beg of you....don't hurt me...
I don't know if I can take it...
The next time I put the wall up, 
It might never come down...

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  1. Date: 3/3/2012 3:40:00 PM
    THAT'S DEEP. I LIKE THIS

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 4:12:00 PM
    Your words and heart my dear are felt throughout your write. Excellent expreSsions my dear poet friend. With love Michael

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 7:12:00 AM
    A very unique way of expressing this kind of feelings, I sure can identify with this situation, I like it very much.