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Comb Over

Z Z Top and Cousin It took the right approach
     Dark sun glasses and beards detract from scraggly hair
Next time my motley hairdo meets with reproach
     Combing forward I’ll consider, sparing the Nair



*For Rick's "Bad Hair Day" contest

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  1. Date: 1/31/2011 3:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/28/2011 1:04:00 PM

    Z Z Top one of my brothers fav bands LOL congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/28/2011 4:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Carolyn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/28/2011 2:58:00 AM

    Congrat's on your big win, Carolyn Lainie

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 10:24:00 PM

    LOL! I love ZZ Top! You can write music to this, Carolyn. I loved reading this fun poem. Congratulations on your WIN in Rick's "Bad Hair Day" contest. Best wishes, Kory

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 7:49:00 PM

    haha. Many congratulations for this HM.

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 7:49:00 PM

    Any poem with Z Z Top mentioned is a winner. Congratulations on your win in the contest. RAY

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 7:47:00 PM

    sparing the nair, what a fun line. I sure remember Nair from junior high. Congrats on the HM, Carolyn. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 6:55:00 PM

    cute one , congrats on your win in the contest Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 6:43:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the contest...Jimmy

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 6:38:00 PM

    Congratyulations on the HM win in the contest of Rick, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 6:33:00 PM

    Funny one Carolyn. congratulations on yor win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 5:46:00 PM

    Congratulations Carolyn on your HM win in this contest--enjoyed your poem--Thanks for clearing my doubt over the Quatrain form--kashinath

  1. Date: 1/27/2011 7:44:00 AM

    Ohh that Nair was awfull! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 4:34:00 AM

    I am stopping by this morning to read your amazing poetry, and to thank you for your kind comments on mine Carolyn. The best to you in ^Rick's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 9:24:00 PM

    lol! Good one Carolyn, Lainie

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 12:50:00 PM

    Funny! Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:20:00 PM

    ZZ are a brilliant Southern Rocking Boogie band. It's ironic that the drummer is called Frank Beard. Good luck in the contest Carolyn....:)

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 4:43:00 PM

    LOL! Good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 2:01:00 PM

    The ending of this was s priceless part of a truly enjoyable poem! Another intriguing use of form so your writing is educational as well as entertaining.

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 1:39:00 PM

    HA-HA-HA-HA funny I entered to but not sure if I done it right....Thank you so much for being there and being a good friend to me and I really love to see your comments.~Luv~Teresa

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 9:07:00 PM

    Oh beware a windy day, very well penned this witty piece. Harry

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 4:38:00 PM

    Great use of this form dear Carolyn ! And what a witty thought dear poet ! You and Debbie must have teamed up wif dah funnys today ! Loved it Carolyn, much love, james

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 3:10:00 PM

    nairy a better bad hair entry have i read as of yet, Carolyn.

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 2:13:00 PM

    I wish I had some hair to comb over. A few scraggly hairs that I try to keep out of my ears. Enjoyed mucho. I would love to visit, but at present I'm trying to save up enough money to visit my son in sunny California. Thanks for the invite. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 12:32:00 PM

    what a laughing " hair loss" gas, carolyn... your sense of humor floors me.. best luck in the contest! :) nette

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 9:39:00 AM

    I am unfamiliar with this poetic form,Carolyn.Still I could enjoy it.Great entry for the contest.

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 5:44:00 PM

    soup mail waiting. Charles

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 5:29:00 PM

    Everything fits nicely here Carolyn for a witty chastushka. I think Rick will like this one.

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 5:17:00 PM

    LOL good one Carolyn! Thanks for the heads up on the 20 lines..I thought it was NO more than BUT you as always are right! Light & Love

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