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Always, I am with you

I know this must sound absurd,
But I've  heard your voice before you ever said a word.
I saw your face a thousand times or more,
Though you and I had never met before.
I knew you long before this day.
I knew you’d come to me, I knew you’d find a way.
I have loved you, without knowing you yet.
Because it seems that our souls have already met.
And somehow I know that I was always there with you.
Even before we knew, perhaps to see you through.
Because I have always been a part of you.
Just as you have always been a part of me too.
I have been here with you from the start.
Somewhere inside you, beating in your heart.
And we would be together.
Our lives and love would remain forever.
It was always a part of the grand plan.
It was set in stone, long before our journey ever began.
Ours is a bond that surpasses space and time.
I will belong to you, and you are forever mine.
Even when we have turned to dust, the love stays.
Because in this life and the next, I am with you always.






Sarah D Comstock
August, 9, 2009

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  1. Date: 1/27/2011 1:55:00 PM

    Good descriptiveness and rhyming here. Just a couple of items need correction: In your third line, either replace "seen" with "saw", or "I" with "I've". In the seventh line, "with out" should be as one word "without" and "know" should be "knowing". Everything else looks just fine.

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 3:59:00 PM

    One of those moments when one just knows...Great one..Enjoyed..Sara