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In My Next Life

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In My Next Life

I will ride the thermals on golden wing
Through feathers the breeze shall sing

And all below shall win my eye
From tranquil clouds and cerulean sky

Dip and dive in a sun so bright
This golden coat of pure delight

Wings shall span and shadows cast
Primary coverts against the sun contrast

And to the aerie I shall glide
Where love is found at my lovers side

This craggy peak shall ethereal flow
Two hearts sated in sunsets glow

Primary coverts: outer wing feathers.


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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 6:05:00 PM

    Flight is a wonderful gift aye? Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 9:40:00 PM

    Thats a beautifu next life - Shaz

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:07:00 PM

    I reading some poems you written,I end up here.This one I like alot,flows lovely in rhyme...beautiful Daniel!! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/9/2011 11:04:00 AM

    Simply beautiful

  1. Date: 1/29/2011 7:46:00 AM

    A wonderful poem with nice rhyme. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 1/26/2011 7:59:00 PM

    A very descriptive set of couplets that have great rhyming.

  1. Date: 1/26/2011 8:14:00 AM

    Your poetry soars and flows perfectly, and as always leaves a warm glow inside.. lovely Daniel... Allie

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 6:53:00 AM

    i like the rhyme

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 10:40:00 AM

    Great one ...Excellent descriptive and expressive work..Grabbed my attention and held on..Sara

  1. Date: 1/14/2011 11:40:00 AM

    this is the way i like to see poetry . with a great flow. and words not too hard to understand. and the beauty of breifness yet saying much. i have a feeling that you'll get your wings. T. S.

  1. Date: 1/10/2011 6:07:00 PM

    Sounds exciting and enthusiastic Daniel .. and free of fleshy body will allow all the things easily .. enjoyed as always with luv..

  1. Date: 1/10/2011 4:48:00 PM

    As one who often dreams of flying, you took me on a delightfully romantic flight in this poem, Daniel. Beautiful images of the birds and sky. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/10/2011 1:41:00 PM

    "Wings shall span and shadows cast Primary coverts against the sun contrast" I feel like that line is forced. Other than that I enjoyed it. Keep it up!