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TAKE ME

Oh, the air that surrounds you
   Is ever sweeter to me.
 
To be near you is such joy ~
   Take me...I am yours
   






































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  1. Date: 1/25/2011 3:55:00 AM

    Congrats Daniel on big win with this juicy one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 1/23/2011 8:13:00 AM

    Congratulations Daniel, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 7:49:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. This is a fine entry.

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 3:03:00 PM

    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Linda, Daniel

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 1:51:00 PM

    simply but simply beautiful! congratulations. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 4:17:00 AM

    Hi Daniel - Congrats on your BIG WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 8:51:00 PM

    Congratulations Daniel on your worthy #4 place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 7:48:00 PM

    Congrats Dan o n your success in my Spicy for men only contest with this thrilling entry luv.. appreciate u supporting my contests....

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 8:12:00 AM

    Very sweet indeed, Dan :) definitely induces smiles :) best of luck in the contest and thank you for dropping by my poems :) -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 1/6/2011 6:37:00 PM

    discovering a new form here, Daniel, this is very profound, Harry

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 6:20:00 PM

    well written simplicitic poem!

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 5:36:00 PM

    love it

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 5:33:00 PM

    Ahhhh.....breathtaking love !! :)