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SOLITUDE

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SOLITUDE

There is nothing divine 
in the stir of silence amidst this soul 
Pain was left to heal, 
Scars suddenly trodden with relieve 
A drop of water per minute, 
rows rumbled with columns 
for this bucket is far from half-full 
A jagged aura of Venus 
hovering with a wondrous grin 
farewell, there is no cause to worry, 
like the quote of good demons 
A world without worry 
a world in a lone glory 
wonders of beauty 
Danger grows and puddles 
in the mind of solitude 
Despicable and deadly volt 
safe and secured for it will never get out 
A word that was left unspoken 
is now a sword cutting through the downtrodden

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  1. Date: 7/9/2011 8:55:00 PM
    I like the use of imagery here.

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 8:42:00 PM
    replied back...

  1. Date: 5/25/2011 12:20:00 PM
    very thought provoking and beautifully worded, Olajide-- sent you soupmail...

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 11:26:00 AM
    Subtle, though the message is loud, O.O. Crimes to humanity where one needs to use, hush hush shutters. Sucks for all these innocents!:( Good luck with this contest...wishing you and yours the best..Mikki

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 12:46:00 PM
    I particularly like the last two lines .. a word that left unspooken has become a sword now. Adelana

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 11:08:00 AM
    Good poetry my friend...thanks for sharing..

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 10:49:00 AM
    What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry O.O. Love, Carol