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Inept

I could write a thousand words
and still fail to capture your
absolute beauty.
A thousand verses of sublime
rhyme and fall short of the 
intent of my love for you.
A thousand dreams in the
glittering of stars, all is 
nought to where you take
me.
And the love song that I write
would only emulate the
beating of this heart, a long
slow pulse of absence.
I take the hand of my muse
in thought and feeling, ever
to caress that day when I
first said I loved you.

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  1. Date: 1/5/2011 8:37:00 AM
    This is just enthralling and eloquent, I love the phrasing of your words, you would surely capture this girls heart with such beautiful poetry~~

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 7:42:00 AM
    I absolutely love this romantic and expressive write of yours Daniel. Interesting title as well, thanks for the smiles.. Sweet indeed ~ Wilma

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 6:16:00 PM
    What a romantic poet does reside in you Daniel! Wonderful poem.Happy New Year-kashinath

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 4:28:00 PM
    So passionate and expressive work...I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve the romance lifts my spirits..Sara

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 9:53:00 AM
    Aaah sigh... as always in awe of the wonderous beauty , the delightful sentiment and completely in love with the words of love you write...Always your friend Allie...

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 6:51:00 AM
    titled perfectly. john h loving iii

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 5:05:00 AM
    Beautiful romantic write my friend...Enjoyed very much....Michael