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Naked trees shiver

           silver sky exhales 

           showers forests with ice dust....

                   naked trees shiver



(4th in Contest Strict Haiku 2 by Charles Henderson)

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:51:00 PM

    Eamon,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 1/7/2011 4:58:00 AM

    Congratulations Eamon on your high placement. Great credit due for this one - creates a magnificent scene, wish you could take a picture of it. Regards, Déirdre

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 8:55:00 AM

    Congratulations. No wonder your entry was chosen in the contest.

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 8:05:00 PM

    beautiful imagery, congrats on your win in the contest

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 6:03:00 PM

    Awesome win, Eamon!

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 4:36:00 PM

    Eamon, Congratulations, you won also, this is a beauty, I love the images in this, silver sky exhaling, I can see the sky with lips blowing and then the forests filled with showers if sleet/snow and the bare trees so cold, shivering, that is just beautiful. What inspiration do you need, this is just magic man.

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 4:34:00 PM

    Con gratulations on the fourth place win in ther contest of Charles, Eamon

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 3:50:00 PM

    Congrats Eamon on your wonderful winning poem in the Haiku contest so lovely your words are.. appreciate your special comments on my poetry always and enjoy your top ten victory once again my friend with luv..

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 2:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 11:58:00 AM

    sure ball win, eamon!.. congrats! :) nette

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 10:14:00 AM

    Congratulations Eamon on your worthy poem's honorable win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 8:36:00 AM

    Brilliant image, Eamon. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 8:07:00 AM

    Ohhh love this one! You are fast becoming a new favorite of mine! Congrad's on this chilly win!

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 7:54:00 AM

    brrrrr.......this also makes me shiver....excellent!! Love this! Carrie

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 6:17:00 AM

    Congratulations Eamon on your well deserved win!-kashinath

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 6:15:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in my contest. I really enjoyed the shivering trees. Charles

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 6:10:00 AM

    Hey!!! Congratulations! I just saw you captured a win for this wonderful haiku. Very good Eamon.

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 4:49:00 AM

    I love this... Simply love it. I see it, feel it and can almost touch it. Well done, Eamon. Very well done. Into my favorites this goes! ps. Thank you for reading, and liking, my work. I so appreciate, so very much, your comments. You are a wonderful write, and I thank you for taking time to write your thoughts of my work. Deb

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 12:20:00 PM

    Nice one Eamon, I have entered the competition too, I think it will be a big contest, everyone seems to be into haiku here. How are you doing? The w4all site is down, so happy to have this one. Maire

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 6:50:00 AM

    Wonderful haiku Eamon.A great entry tn the contest.

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 4:56:00 AM

    Wonderfully description of a frosty forest here Eamon. Déirdre

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 4:52:00 AM

    What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry eamon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 7:49:00 PM

    so creative Eamon! You'll do great in the contest I'm sure... Lay

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 5:42:00 PM

    Nice pen picture you have worded of the naked trees in this wonderful haiku, Eamon

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 3:32:00 PM

    Pretty portrait in words Eamon.. luv the way u presented it and know Chaz will luv it too..good luck my friend and thankxx for your encouraging words on my entry for Deb's contest... it took almost a month to get it out but finally ..finished product appeared ... much success with your imagery filled Haiku..with luv..

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 2:56:00 PM

    enjoyed this piece

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 7:35:00 AM

    Very ,very Good!!! excellent Haiku.... should do well in the contest.....Michael