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''Rain with Roy''

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''Rain with Roy''

On the top pole class room roof braced,
With a chalk piece love’s eternity.
Childish love, but unbounded ;
Still unfaded ,''Rain with Roy’’.

Showered away Rain ;
Dry brook flooded.
Pure drops of rain,
No dirt blended.

Vanished intervals all
Like rainbows fair.
Last leaf did fall,
School tree bare.

Roy had stood as if in the mist,
Watching her vanishing in school bus.

For Brain Strand's Contest
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  1. Date: 1/14/2011 9:34:00 AM
    Congratulations Fabiyas on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 4:41:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the Rain Contest,Fabiyas. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 1:40:00 PM
    Congratulations on your fine win in Constance's Rain Contest. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 12:22:00 PM
    I like the contemporary, original approach you took to the theme of this contest, Fabiyas. Congratulations on your success. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 6:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of constance, Fabiyas

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 9:24:00 PM
    Many Congrats Fabiyas on HM in conttest with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 8:45:00 PM
    Congrats FABIYAS on your HM in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry my friend... enjoy your very special honor with luv..

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 8:05:00 PM
    This is unique and good. Lots of congratulations for this win.

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 7:34:00 PM
    Nice image... a little sweet crush for Roy, enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 7:15:00 PM
    Indeed, something about the play in the rain that just give Roy....color? (hmmm, i forgot the right word for it). anyway, have a great year Fabiyas :D

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 5:16:00 AM
    Such an interesting poem, enjoyed this very much. Harry

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 2:51:00 PM
    very creative writing

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 5:17:00 AM
    Enjoyed your work..I am thinking that this is a child's first day of school but not sure..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Your presence at my work made my morn lighter..Sara

  1. Date: 1/1/2011 4:35:00 PM
    Quite vivid in your lines so descriptive FABIYAS... the rain has played a huge part in your lines setting the scene... btw your Bike Ride poem did win in my TOYLAND contest but the system will not post the 2011 winners list just yet till Administration fixes it.. but I did a blog a few days ago listing the winners if u want to check it out luv..