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The Tangled Web

The Tangled Web

Lines on her face grew deeper when fabrications were conceived
When further contradictions came, she knew not what to believe
Caught in a lie I’d be sent to my room; there’d be no reprieve
Mom said, "A tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive”

My boyfriend had no license yet; we wanted to double date
To get my mom’s permission, a lie I had to perpetrate
Claimed the driver was my boyfriend’s brother to mom’s fears abate
This was the first strand in a tangled web I chose to create

When the invitation to his wedding came, mom was irate
The “driver” had another last name, more lies I did inflate
“They have the same mom, just different dads,” but this did not equate
She’d met his Catholic parents; divorce was against our mandate

“His older brother’s father died.” This made my mom a skeptic
I wish mom would have washed my mouth out with an antiseptic
For now the web that hovered above had grown so very thick
Mom was on to me for sure, so she devised a clever trick

At mass my mom asked his where her first husband had been buried
How quickly she responded, “I’ve never before been married.”
For two years these lies had grown, and so much guilt I had carried
This snowball led me to declare I’d never again mislead

Though the truth may bring results that are unsatisfactory
You won’t be covered by webs built of story upon story
And when the truth prevails, you won’t see eyes accusatory
Or spend your teen years in a room filled with falsehoods’ armory


*True story for Paula’s “My Parent” contest

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  1. Date: 1/9/2011 5:35:00 PM

    this was a fun read as well. oh the white lies we tell to get what we want! --Madison

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 2:18:00 PM

    Super little tale of naughty lies Carolyn. They always trip us up in the end. A thoroughly enjoyable read this late Sunday night....:)

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 10:03:00 AM

    Wow, Carolyn. And I always thought you were perfect! Oh, that's because you learned early the importance of honesty. (Yes! I know that no one living on earth is perfect.) Thanks for sharing this. It gives a little insight into the wonderful heart of Carolyn Devonshire, a person extrodinaire! Honest, loving, sensitive, and caring. I am so glad you won recognition with this poem. You are a wonderful friend. Thank you for being you. Love, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 1/8/2011 6:28:00 PM

    Carolyn, you have captured the essence of tangled webs here. great job. I have One on my site dealing with lies as well--Never Applaud a Fraud. But the thing that caught my eye was your title is similar one of mine which I called Tangled Webs

  1. Date: 1/7/2011 8:46:00 AM

    My congratulations for your well deserved win, Carolyn! I think that most of us could relate similar stories!!! Thank you so much for your kind comments and have a great year ahead with good health!...Love, Gert

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 12:05:00 PM

    I can see why this was chosen to be among the best in the contest. You have both great descriptiveness and rhyming throughout the work.

  1. Date: 1/5/2011 5:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Carolyn in the "My Parent" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 6:05:00 PM

    Carolyn my dear; this write is so good, that I am inspired to twist mine-self, in a most horrid web; in poetic write that is, on the male side of the pretense of; "My Parent" !...LOL<--that means, only kidd'n ! Great write dear poet, and I see Congratulations is in order !(((((claps))))) much love, james

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 3:34:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 7:45:00 AM

    congratulations.....this cleverly structured and beautifully written piece desrved to win Carolyn .......( and if the truth were known, ...........it deserved to be far higher up in the list ! )....best wishes...Syd

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 6:14:00 AM

    Hi Carolyn . Congratulations on your result in the contest with this great piece. A thoroughly deserved success. Lesson learned. My Mum says, ' a good lier must have a good memory'. Good luck to you. Eamon

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 5:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on this HM win in the contest of Francine, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/4/2011 3:47:00 AM

    one big hurrah, carolyn... congrats! :) nette

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 9:28:00 PM

    My congratulations to you, Carolyn on your best winning on this contest. Very interesting read. (^_^) Noel.

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 8:28:00 PM

    This is so deep and lovely.many congratulations for this super win.

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 7:56:00 PM

    a beautiful gem as always Carolyn! Congrats... Lay

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 6:55:00 PM

    lWell told as I said before and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 5:56:00 PM

    I am not surprised to see this poem on the winning page....so heartfelt it is. Congratulations, dear Carolyn. I hope your are feeling well again?

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 5:37:00 PM

    thank you for supporting my contest Carolyn and congrats on your HM

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 2:31:00 PM

    This is a very entertaining and thoroughly rhymed story, with a universal application with respect to telling a "white lie"! I love how the mom never gives up!

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 1:17:00 PM

    a lovely cleverly-written story with excellent rhyming......best of luck in the competitiion, Carolyn......sincerest wishes...... Syd

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 9:18:00 AM

    first of all, wishing you great luck in the contest by Paula. happy new yea, sorry for the absence all the while. Great write here, Son.

  1. Date: 1/3/2011 5:23:00 AM

    Such wonderful detail here, good luck with this in the contest, Happy New Year Carolyn. Harry

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 2:47:00 PM

    fantastic story

  1. Date: 1/2/2011 8:18:00 AM

    "Neither a borrower or a lender be." This is the only category I have a fair amount of innocence in. Ah, but I tell myself - (they were all such little white lies) Yes, but so many hundreds makes a B IG one. Enjoyed. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 1/1/2011 8:45:00 PM

    Great entry for the contest Carolyn.. Awesome memories as well.. Good luck for the contest as well, love Wilma

  1. Date: 1/1/2011 6:11:00 PM

    you were imaginative....LOL

  1. Date: 1/1/2011 6:08:00 PM

    Your so sweet!!!!!!!!!always words that make me smile!!!!!!!!Thank you!!!_________________________________ Lies upon Lies deeper and deeper~~great message~don't the parental units always know~lol~A friend once told me you only have to remember the lies(think about that one) Blessings~Rick

  1. Date: 1/1/2011 3:50:00 PM

    Hi Carolyn, thanks for your comment on "gray around me" this poem came from a past terrible relationship. I am now as happy as a bug in a rug. I loved your poem it sent a true message. I hope you have a happy and blessed 2011. Jancarl

  1. Date: 1/1/2011 2:58:00 PM

    Carolyn, ain't it something how moms can see thru our storie to the truth? Mine sure could. Happy New Year to you and yours and thanks so much for your kind comments on my stuff. Love, Will

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