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THE HAPPIEST DAY

I have open my heart and free my mind
I become one with us
And one with time
I have connected to life
As it connected to me
Oh my lord I turned 17
Yes a age
Of happiness an joy
R rated movies will be my toy
Curfew is lifted
As I am old
This is just the beginning I am told
Now this may seem silly
Yes indeed
But can you remember when you turned 17
Its a landmark
An age of time
All grown
Well.. in a years time
2010
gave me this gift
Wrapped it up with a kiss
Now, now
You may say “what?”
“It been a whole year
more things should have filled with you cheer.”
But nothing such happened
In this year combine
I continued life, nothing to divine
So the age of 17 
Has occurred
Now 2011
Should be much more fun
The gift of 18 
Has begun
Oh I cant wait for this magnificent gift
But for now I shall say
October 24 was the happiest day!

Note: October 24 was my Birthday

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  1. Date: 1/13/2011 12:05:00 PM

    Congratulations Taina on your win in Royal Trevino's contest "New Year". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/10/2011 7:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on nthis well deserved Hm in the contest of Royal, Taina

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 11:24:00 AM

    Enjoy your youth and don't wish it away. Youth arrives and is gone Old age comes to stay. Congratulations. Joyce

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 10:13:00 AM

    Congrats Taina on your HM in Royal's contest with this wonderful write and entry.. enjoy your special honor with luv..

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 4:54:00 PM

    Believe it or not geting older doesn't necessarily make us wiser ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/25/2010 2:02:00 PM

    This is a wonderful poem Taina!Must be a winner in the contest.