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Cold Hand

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Cold Hand

Welcome back
Is been quite long since last we spoke
I noticed you don't like me
Don't worry
I don't like you either
Is not like we gonna kill each other in public
Im sure you don't want to call attention friend
So how long will it take?
A good amount of money might work for me
A better splash will satisfy us all
Driving the night to the sun
Im sure is gonna be pretty
Pretty fatal
Will it take a chain to hold you?
A jail to lock you?
Is gonna be fun
Is gonna hurt a lot
So i will hear you sing pain for us all
Look at the crowd
Were is she?
Wasn't she protecting you from me?
Im here in front of you
With my blade drawn
Fearless
Look at my smile
Look up my face
See me tremble in exited
Many days fell to night
So many nights long away from day
Seeing mimics become actions
So many people here your screams of fear and help will not be heard
Im sure i will slice deep
That neck is quite pale
To my eyes is quite tainted in red
My insanity
My tongue asks desperate for your blood
It has made me hungrier every passing day and night
Is smiling deep
But what is behind these eyes?
Behind it all the story no body tells
The blood no body tastes
But i know the story
I know the taste
And i want to repeat that story
That taste
I want to
Now!


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  1. Date: 12/22/2010 5:24:00 PM

    Quite creative and innovative write on Cold hand, Derek